For Those Seeking Criticism
A Poem by TTBoy
Coming and going
it was funny they weren’t knowing
what they thought was good
should have stayed in the hood
They didn’t have the right picture
Adding their two cents
to something that really didn’t make any sense
Too ashamed to admit it
Not legit enough yet to quit it
Their name to something seemed the right mixture
A permanent fixture
on a scene devoid of a picture
and fame is the name of the ecclectic game
Lo and behold
the same lines can get old
praises that they don’t use a real name
Long live
an Adonis that could give
face with oh so such good taste
But another silly review
just hanging in the que
laughs cause a mind is a terrible thing to waste
Escribe! Escribe!
Can they tell that someone is that way
How else can you feel somebody up
Online you can dine
with someone who might not be so fine
You may need a little more in your cup
Live and let live
and don’t expect much more
what else did you do it for
When you’re ready for attention
oh, did I forget to mention
It’s not always best to receive, but to give
